A decade ago,she had left it all behind,his maddening rage,abuse and the marriage.
He met his match in a disgruntled servant who smashed his master's skull in a fit of rage.He lay in the hospital bed on life-supports.
A shrill ring and a voice -"Your call madam.....the hospital".
wow. very powerful.
ReplyDeleteWhy did she have to come back?
ReplyDeleteGruesome end, but the story of the woman is something I've seen before.
ReplyDeleteI had goosebumps as I read it!! Verry well written :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a good one, Sharmila!
ReplyDeleteDoing her duty until the end!
Uh oh! Sad, the ties that bind us.
ReplyDeleteTo be fair to you it served him right.
ReplyDeletemaybe... serves him right.
ReplyDeleteNicely put up in 100 words...it reminded me of my short story 'Her Decision', which I posted on Today's woman back in 2007.
ReplyDeleteOMG!! totally loved it.. how did you write it.. such a long story in just few words.. kudos gal :)
ReplyDeleteThe fate of so many - compassion and humanity are noble traits. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI so want another 100 words on this one. And then what happened? You can't get us here and leave us hanging. Please, pretty please...............do a part 2 on this. I like the way the story is going.
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